Kiki VN Rough Outline

CONTEXT/ASSUMPTIONS:

Koikatsu is being used for scenes.

The scenes may be rendered in 3rd person (see scene 1). I leave composition to the artist.

Champy and Kiki are happily married.

It is spring.

There should be minimal conflict and tension, just enough to move things forward. Bad ends (if any) should be comedy-only.

Cute > Lewd

The prose should be simple but descriptive. The voice should be casual. It may get a little more elaborate when Champy wants to wax poetic about how wonderful his wife is. I can turn up the prose a bit here and there if something particularly catches Champy's attention.
This helps with immersion and self-inserting.

There should be few branches in the narrative, for ease of coding and writing.

The goal is to create a cute interactive date in a park with Kiki.

SELF-REMINDER FOR WRITECHAMP: THIS IS AN OUTLINE. MINIMAL DESCRIPTION. FOCUS ON EVENTS, BRANCHES, NOT PROSE.

Key:

In e.g., “1a”, “1” represents a scene. “a” represents a choice.
BAD END == back to main menu after showing text.

ARRIVAL
Champy arrives at the park in the early afternoon for a date with his wife. He stands at the gate and looks over his outfit. He's wearing:

1a. A suit
1b. His signature green speedo
1c. Nothing

If c, immediately get arrested. Kiki bails you out of jail and calls you jail boy. BAD END

Otherwise, change his outfit to reflect the choice.

He has a gift. What did he bring?
1d. A flower crown made of forget-me-nots.
1e. A cute gothic choker/collar.
1f. Earrings shaped like carrots.

-> Remember this choice.

FINDING KIKI
There’s a tower with a clock on it. Champy’s right on time but he doesn’t see Kiki. How does he look for her?

2a. Just check out the surroundings
2b. Hif hif
2c. Wait for her
2d. Wander aimlessly

If a, receive more detailed description of the surroundings.
If bcd, find kiki one of 3 ways (narrated ofc).

KIKI FOUND
One way or another, you found Kiki! She is well off the path in the woods playing with wild rabbits. She is wearing a black sundress, a big shady hat, and thongs. It looks like she put on makeup for the date and got her nails done. She looks like a beautiful doll come to life.

3a. Watch them.
3b. Approach cautiously.
3c. Approach recklessly.
3d. Don’t approach, just scream incoherently.

If a, describe scene in further detail and loop back. Kiki is talking to the rabbits in Kikinese and they seem to understand. It’s very cute.

If bc, approach. Rabbits are scared off or leave.

If d, both the rabbits and kiki just look at you bewildered, then make eye contact, kiki shrugs and the rabbits shake their heads before leaving.

GIFT
You brought Kiki a gift! You present it to her. She is happy and grateful and immediately puts it on. You get a rabbity kiss and a hug. This is one of the moments I wax poetic a bit.

-> Update Kiki’s model to reflect choice.

4a. Kiss her deeper

4b. Hug her closer

4c. Fondle her ears

If abc, things start to heat up a little bit but a rabbit pops out from behind a bush and looks at you judgingly, you both stop.

WHAT NOW?
You found Kiki and got a bit hubba hubba. There’s still more date. You wander for a bit with Kiki holding close to your side.

5a. Community Garden.
5b. Duck Pond.
5c. Let Kiki choose.

If a, walk with Kiki through the garden. She excitedly picks you a flower and it’s very cute. She sniffs the flower and has a sneezing fit and it’s very cute. If you brought her the flower crown, you can choose:

5d. Keep the flower
5e. Put the flower in her crown

If b, walk down long path to a large pond encircled by trees. Graphic description of handholding. You are attacked by a goose but you stand your ground and subdue the terrifying beast. Kiki cheers you on and gets a bit bloodthirsty by the end:

5f. Calm her down
5g. Egg her on

If c, Kiki can’t decide but hears a sound that your ears don’t pick up. She suddenly runs away and you chase after her. She finds old ladies playing mahjong in the park and joins in. You cheer for her but don’t understand what’s happening. She wins, you think. Drunk on victory she demands a smooch and you oblige. The old ladies cheer.

If de, short scene then go to 6.

If f, the goose bows gratefully and gracefully and leaves.
If g, fade to black, go to 6. Kiki now has a little splash of blood on her face.

END
All in all, you had a great day with Kiki. Short recap of player choices and results as they walk back to the park gate. The sun is setting, Kiki is sleepy and falling behind:

6a. Carry her like a princess
6b. Carry her piggyback

In either case, show them from the front with champy carrying kiki exiting the park gate where the game started. Setting sun behind them. Champy muses about how much he loves her, very lovepost. Final choice:
6c. What do (You) admire most about her? Prompt the player to sit in silence and think about it, then post their thoughts in the bread.

Fade to black, kiki sleep-mumbles “I love you” and Champy says it back.